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Maybe not all hope is lost for me after all... I'm considering uploading it separately, what do you think?
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make the figure less sketchy and add a background.
Also, add some small animation around the wolf's feet while he's running, like a cloud of dust being kicked up as he runs, or visible friction of the dirt or grass under the wolf's paws.
Furthermore, I couldn't help but giggle as he ripped his shirt off. I found that to be a little cliche.
Overall a very good job, as you clearly get the concept across of the human - to - animal transformation.
The first thing that caught me was the figure leaping into the scene, which made me envision she was running away after having this feel of "something's not right", and the way her pupils grew upon seeing the full moon was a great way to start the transition.
Another aspect of this piece that caught my attention was the relative subtlety of her claws growing in, and the feet going to digit-grade(sp?)...that was very smooth and well done in the roughs, so I can imagine how it'll look when the project is finished off in full, living color.
I think the thing I liked the best was watching the figure rip off her shirt instead of simply bursting through it; this gives me the impression that despite her turning into a bestial creature, she still possesses intelligence and the ability to make a conscious choice. If there was one part of this piece that won me over, it was that. Excellent spin on the classic transformation.
Of course, the howl...you've GOT to have a howl when you finish a werewolf transformation, and yours was quite impacting and better than average. The animation of her bounding off in her wolf-self had a great deal of energy, but being a rough, it was hard to see whether she was more angry, energetic, or just plain defiant, but I'm nit-picking a little.
Overall take on this piece: I like the ambition behind it, and although some of the aspects were tried and true, you did have a decent amount of originality, and your own spin on the transformation scored some points there. The animation is pretty damn smooth, and I can tell there is a great deal of talent behind the scene with an increasing level of skill. I'd LOVE to see what you do with this piece even three or six months down the road...I believe you'll evolve to an even higher level of expression than you're already at. ((And believe me, you're pretty high on that level of expression in the first place; it's what earned the first compliment you received from me.)
The impact was also impressive, specifically those eyes, the ripping of the shirt, and the bounding offstage at the end.
This is an excellent piece at 4.25 out of 5.00
Please, keep up the great work, and I can't wait to see what you do next.
--Brother Abram
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